Thursday, January 21, 2010

The Pineville Bank Tragedy

One nice calm day in the Pineville bank everybody Is working hard. People are waiting to get money for the big fair. When then all of a sudden a man named Delyn Yibig comes in the with 5 other men. They tell the people to all go in the meeting room or they will die. One of the men goes with the people and waits for Delyn to give instructions. All 6 men have Ak47 guns . One of the men named Bob Paper made all the hostages give him their phones but one hostage named Mark Water is still in the lobby hiding under a table. He still has his phone and he calls the police. He tells the cops that there are 6 men in the bank with ak47s and they took the people that were in the bank hostage.
The next thing Mark knows he can hear the cops coming but what he didn’t know was that Delyn had a sniper on the roof . When the cops come they are killed. Then the cops call the bank to try to negotiate with Delyn. He said that if he does not get to see his mom by midnight he will blow up the bank. Until then he will kill a hostage every 30 min. The main problem is that everybody thinks that his mom is dead but Delyn will not believe it. By the time the Swat team comes Delyn had already killed 1 hostage named Fake Cheese. Then the cops called Delyn to try to make Delyn let the hostage . He said no and that if he can talk with his mom he will call off the sniper. The cops get a man who can impersonate his mom’s voice. The cops call Delyn but in the time it took to get the man to fake the voice Delyn killed 2 more people Mark Water and Jack Dill.
Delyn calls off the sniper. The swat team goes to get the sniper on the roof of the big building across the street from the bank. The sniper is now in custody . Then the swat team moves Into the bank. The chief of police, Bill Math, gets a call that they found Delyn Yibig’s mom and she is told to come to the bank so her son does not go killing more of people. When his mom comes she is taken in to the bank by the swat team. When Yibig sees the swat team he tells them to leave or he will blow up the bank. Then the swat team says that they have his mom and that she is coming in to the bank. He started to shoot and the swat team shot back. Delyn killed his mom the whole thing was a trap. The swat team tells him to drop the gun or the sniper will kill him but Delyn had one of his men go and kill the sniper. Then Delyn told the swat team to leave or he will blow up the bank they didn’t. The cops outside were getting ready to move in when then all of a sudden there was a big bang! Delyn had blown up the bank. All the people in the bank or near the bank were killed. The city of Pineville will make a memorial for all the people who were killed on that day. Even Delyn and the 6 men that helped him had a memorial.

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

a clean well lighed place

How would you feel if you had to go to a café every night so you would not be lonely? The café was a place that people could go to feel safe. In the story a Clean Well Lighted Place the two old men don’t want to go in the dark.
The old man In the story a Clean Well Place goes to a café every night and gets drunk. The old man is lonely; he lives alone and doesn’t like to go home to a dark house . In the beginning the waiter said the old man tried to kill himself. The older waiter is similar to the old man. They both don’t want to go in the dark.
The café in the story was a clean well lighted place for people to go and feel safe in the night . the younger water at the café doesn’t like to stay open all night but the old man comes every night and stays all night long. The older water want to stay open stay open all night for the people who want a clean well lighted place to go to at night to feel safe. That is why the older water what to
The two old men in a clean well lighted place are lonely and don’t want to go home to their dark home. The older waiter go to a bar after the younger one close the café. The older waiter mite go to get drunk just like the old men.





Jeremy

Thursday, January 14, 2010

sking

i am my gfrist ski trip of the year i was going up a hill when i lost my grip on the rope it starts to drag me