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Thursday, January 14, 2010
sking
i am my gfrist ski trip of the year i was going up a hill when i lost my grip on the rope it starts to drag me
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Katie(:
January 21, 2010 at 8:25 AM
Good descriptation! But you need to expand your story into much deeper thought
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1. longer conclusion - discuss what you learned from the story
2.use 3 great words
3. Use the Modes of Literature notes to prove the plotline.
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Good descriptation! But you need to expand your story into much deeper thought
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